Wednesday, 16 October 2013

The Little Yellow House

Once there was a house.It was a yellow house.There was a deck outside of the house.No one lived in that house.Near the house was a little chair and bench.No one sat there because no one lived there.Inside the house as a bed a big room and a television that did not work.The keys were inside the house and the house was locked because the keys were inside the house.The house was on a small hill near some cold mountains with snow on it.One day a family came to the house and wondered who built this house.The Husband said ''Tomorrow we will come back with a ladder,go into the chimney like santa claus get the keys and bust it down so we can make it a big as hotel that touches the snow mountains and we can sell our old house.But his wife did not want to do that she said ''We can crash the window then get an new window and live in this house but make it more bigger''But then her kids were complaining too they said''Boring idea mum this is just little and we cant sleep in one room we just wanna stay in our house as usual''Mum said''Why is my idea boring i said i can make it bigger'' ''Dad said we'll just make it as a hotel cause we are rich''.So the next day they got the ladder,Climbed into the chimney and unlocked the house they called the busters and the busters busted it down and built a big as hotel that reached the snowy mountains and lots and lots of people lived in the hotel and the family was really really happy.The End
By Mitchell

2 comments:

  1. This is a wonderful and creative story Mitchell! I'm so impressed!

    I particularly love the way you described the place so that I knew exactly what it was like.

    Well done!

    From Miss Nalder

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  2. Hey mitchell your sory was cool

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