Thursday, 13 February 2014

Wicked Sentences

This week we have been talking about writing interesting sentences. Our sentences needed to make sense, have correct punctuation, and have some interesting detail.

Here are a few of them:

There is a dark black chimpanzee waiting in a tall tree staring at some shiny yellow bananas.

On Tuesdays and Wednesdays after school I love to go home because there is always a really big chocolate strawberry cake waiting to be eaten.

Beneath the tree there is a ripe banana waiting to be eaten.

When I get home, I go into the cupboard and sneak some cake!

There is a monkey on a tree. He is gazing at a delicious enormous banana next door, but he can't reach it and he feels sorry for himself.

On top of the desk is a Chromebook waiting to be used.

The Chromebook is on top of the desk waiting for a child to play on it.

When Paige finishes playing wiht her netbook she puts it in the middle of the desk so it won't fall down from the table.

There is a lazy monkey sitting in a tree waiting for the lovely yellow banana.

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